Reading comp PrepTest 145 · Section 1 · Question 8

Passage

 . The following passage is adapted from an  . article published in 1993.  .  .       How severe should the punishment Remaining source text redacted.
Passage walkthrough
Passage SummaryTopic:

Paragraph 1
  • Paragraph note
    • A question is asked; an answer is presented
  • Views, minor Meta-Structures, and the author's attitude
    • Question - How severe should punishment for corporate crimes be?
    • Economists - The penalty should exceed the benefit
    • E.g. - Sell an unsafe product and make $6m, punishment should be more, like $7m
Paragraph 2
  • Paragraph note
    • An implication of the Economists is pointed out
  • Views, minor Meta-Structures, and the author's attitude
    • Assumption - The law should focus on earning, not morality, and shouldn't be higher just because community finds the crime abhorrent
Paragraph 3
  • Paragraph note
    • The Author criticizes the approach of the Economist
  • Views, minor Meta-Structures, and the author's attitude
    • Author - Economist argument is "impractical/impossible"
    • Detection rates have to be factored in—if there's a 10% chance of being detected, need to have a penalty much higher to account for it, or it's more profitable to keep committing crime
Paragraph 4
  • Paragraph note
    • An implication of the flaw pointed out by the Author is presented; the Author advocates for a general solution
  • Views, minor Meta-Structures, and the author's attitude
    • Background - Detection rates are ~10%
    • Implication - Fines have to be so high as to put companies out of business and result in unemployment
    • Need another factor, maybe moral weight, to make penalties both practical and just
Main Point:
Penalties for corporate crimes that reconcile cost and benefit while taking detection ratios into account would be too high, so some other factor (possibly moral weight) needs to be considered to make these penalties both practical and just.

Key Lines:
Lines 1-4 - The central question is presented
Lines 4-6 - One answer is presented
Lines 20-21 - The Author states her opinion on the answer presented by the Economists
Lines 21-24 - The Author brings up the problem with the Economists' answer
Lines 43-47 - The Author argues that fixing the problem in one way would result in unacceptable outcomes
Lines 47 - The Author presents her solution to this problem and answer to the overall question

Meta-Structure:
Question/Answer - The Author kicks the passage off with a question (Lines 1-4) about how to assess punishment/finds for corporate crimes. She presents one answer (from some Economists, Lines 4-8). However, she then points out a problem with that solution (Lines 20-25), and an implication of that problem that makes a certain solution impractical (Lines 43-47). She then ends with her own way to address the problem/initial question, but it's less than certain (Lines 47-51; she suggests "some other criterion" be added to the equation).

Problem/Solution - The Author presents a problem with focusing on making companies pay more than their crime earned in raising detection ratios (Lines 21-25). She mentions a potential solution—taking the detection ratios into account—but highlights a problem with that solution, as well (Lines 43-47).

Example - The Author uses an extended example of a crime that makes a corporation $6m in profit from selling an unsafe product (Lines 8-10). From this, she talks about a punishment exceeding this amount (Line 10), and what the punishment would need to be taking a certain detection ratio into account (Line 29; Lines 36-39).

Last Thoughts:
Paragraph 2 is weird in that it seems to be a weird side point. However, the question of morality comes back around at the end of the passage when the Author suggests it as a possible additional criterion in assessing corporate fines. She doesn't say that it should be the criterion, but she suggests it as one possible criterion to make these punishments just and practical.

Question prompt

Which one of the Remaining source text redacted.
Why the credited answer is right

Credited answer: E

The notes below walk through why it fits the stem and how to eliminate the rest.

Question Type

Legal

Answer choices

  1. A
    Because not all corporate Remaining source text redacted.
    Why choice A is not credited
    Incorrect. (Lines 43-51) The Author notes that a solution that considers cost/benefit and detection ratios into account would lead to "astronomical penalties" that would "throw thousands" out of work, and thus "some other criterion" must be added. This answer reflects an answer to the question that the Author points out a flaw in, so it's incorrect.
  2. B
    The reckoning of cost Remaining source text redacted.
    Why choice B is not credited
    Incorrect. (Lines 43-51) This answer is functionally equivalent to answer (A) in that it presents a solution that relies on cost/benefit and detection ratios, so it's wrong for much the same reasons. (This answer is also worse than that one since that answer at least talks about finding a practical and fair/just solution, which the Author advocates for in the last line.)
  3. C
    Because they argue that Remaining source text redacted.
    Why choice C is not credited
    Incorrect. (Lines 1-5; Lines 47-51) The Author presents a solution to the question of how to punish corporate crimes—her main point isn't about how the Economists are doing an injustice to communities that argue for moral weight to factor into punishment. This answer might reflect Paragraph 2, but it doesn't capture the Author's eventual solution/answer.
  4. D
    Because it does not Remaining source text redacted.
    Why choice D is not credited
    Incorrect. (Lines 43-51) This answer reflects up through Paragraph 3, but it fails to account for Paragraph 4, where the Author showed that accounting for detection ratios itself has problems that need to be solved by the consideration of another criterion.
  5. E
    Because the need to Remaining source text redacted.
    Why choice E matches the stem
    Correct. Question Type:
    Main Point

    Strategy Overview:
    Reiterate the main point as we stated it after reading through the passage

    Answer Anticipation/Relevant Lines:
    The Author kicks the passage off with a question (Lines 1-4) about how to assess punishment/finds for corporate crimes. When a passage's central concern is answering a question—as this one's is—then the Author's preferred answer to that question will generally serve as the main point.

    After introducing the question, the Author presents one answer (from some Economists, Lines 4-8)—make the punishment exceed the financial benefit of the crime. However, she then points out a problem with that solution (Lines 20-25) in that it fails to take into account the detection ratios of the crime. She then shows that one way to address—multiple the fine by the detection ratio—would have an unacceptable outcome in that companies would fold and people would lose their jobs (Lines 43-47).

    Finally, she ends with her own way to address the problem/initial question, but it's less than certain—to make these punishments both practical and just, another criterion (e.g., moral weight) needs to be considered (Lines 47-51).

    That answer, no matter how wishy-washy, is the main point, so we summed it up as:

    Penalties for corporate crimes that reconcile cost and benefit while taking detection ratios into account would be too high, so some other factor (possibly moral weight) needs to be considered to make these penalties both practical and just.

    Answer Explanation:
    (Lines 1-5; Lines 43-51) The Author presents a question at the beginning of the passage, and she spends the rest of the time analyzing potential answers to it. At the end of the passage, she suggests her answer—since reconciling costs and benefits with detection ratios in mind would result in impractically high punishments, another criterion has to be considered to make these penalties just and practical. This answer reflects that answer, so it's correct.

    Key Takeaway:
    When a passage is dominated by a common argument structure, you should use what we know about that structure to help determine the main point. Here, there were two—Question/Answer, and Problem/Solution. In the former, the Author's answer is generally the main point. In the latter, the Author's solution is usually the main point.

    In this passage, the Author pointed out a problem with the answer to a question, and then suggested a solution to that problem that reflected a unique answer to the question. Since the Author's solution and answer were one in the same, that idea was almost certainly the main point of the argument.

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Answer choice distribution

  1. A 12%
  2. B 3%
  3. C 5%
  4. D 11%
  5. E Credited 68%

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  • Why not A? 3 replies

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