Conclusion

Started by achalfp97 · started 2020-04-26 23:26 · last activity 2020-04-27 18:00 · 2 replies

Hi! I am a little confused as to what the conclusion is in this prompt. Why is it not the part that starts with “Therefore”? Thanks!

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  1. Skylar · 2020-04-27 02:18

    @achalfp97, happy to help! The passage can be broken down as follows: Premise: Democracy requires no restriction on citizens' ability to share their ideas freely, without fear of reprisal. Subsidiary Conclusion/Premise: Therefore, the right to have private and unmonitored conversations is essential to democracy. (Overall) Conclusion: For a government to monitor Internet conversations would thus setback democracy. You are correct in identifying "therefore" as an indicator of a conclusion. However, "thus" is also a conclusion indicator. Here, the second sentence is a conclusion that is supported by the first sentence. However, this second sentence in turn supports a larger conclusion- the last sentence. We call something that is both a conclusion and a premise that supports a larger conclusion a "subsidiary conclusion." That is what the second sentence is. Does that make sense? Please let us know if you have any additional questions!
  2. achalfp97 · 2020-04-27 18:00

    Great! Thanks for the help, Skylar.

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