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@Ceci, Great question. Let's take a look. The question asks, "Which one of the following most accurately describes the organization of the passage?" You said you picked (E) instead of (D). (E) says, "The first paragraph outlines a problem, the middle paragraphs present two consequences of that problem, and the final paragraph attempts to identify the parties that are responsible for the problem." The reason why (E) is wrong isn't because it says the first paragraph outlines a problem. In the first paragraph, the author of the passage does pose a question, but because he's frustrated that perfume is not considered a great art, it's fine for us to accept this answer choice referring to that as a problem. The real problem with (E) lies with how it classifies the middle paragraphs. In the middle paragraphs, the author does not discuss two consequences of the problem from the first paragraph; rather, the author discusses why it's a problem, for the reason that great perfume is extremely similar to other types of art forms. Thus, the problem with (E) is that it incorrectly identifies the purpose of the middle paragraphs of the passage, so we can get rid of this answer choice. (D) says, "The first paragraph poses a question, the middle paragraphs present a case that helps to justify the posing of that question, and the final paragraph presents a possible answer to the question." The main purpose of the first paragraph of the passage is to present the question mentioned in line 7: "Why is great perfume not taken more seriously?" The following two paragraphs do not provide an answer to that question, but they do present additional reasons as to why great perfumes are truly works of art and should thus be taken more seriously. In doing so, the middle two paragraphs serve as a means for the author to justify the initial question she poses, which makes it seem nonsensical that great perfume isn't taken more seriously. In the last paragraph of the passage, the author presents one potential answer to her question, which is contained in lines 44-47 when she says, "Perhaps one of reason that truly great smells are so often undervalued is that perfumes are today made and distributed under the not particularly watchful gaze of a few large corporations." (D) captures the true functions of each of the paragraphs in the passage, so it's our correct answer choice. Does this make sense? Do you see why (E) is wrong now? Let us know if you have any more questions!